Victor, the 66 year old knight set off on a journey. He was the hero of the City of Orabors.

He had to fight the deadly poisonous snake. When he arrived there was clutter everywhere, the people had run away. He went to find the snake, but had a mishap, he had forgotton to tie his boot laces and fell over.

When he got up he saw the snake, it was as thick as his arm and its skin was moist and slimy under the bright orange sun.

With his sword he killed the snake, the Knight was victorious again.

2 responses »

  1. m1ssp says:

    Wow, I love this Theo. It is almost quite a funny story with the great knight tripping over his laces!! You have also included some excellent description too.
    However, what I really like is how you have varied your sentences. Did you know that you have included lots of subordinate clauses??
    Fantastic work – well done!
    Miss P πŸ™‚

  2. Theo curry says:

    Thank you Miss P

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