It was dusk at the dry desert of death. Another knight had been sent on a mission to defeat the evil beast but still the beast was victorious. But there was one more knight left. His name was Frederick and he always had mishaps. He was a hero and loved eating oranges. Walking onto the desert Frederick noticed there was a bit too much clutter lying around. Suddenly out of the sand rose a terrifying monster. His name was the Clutter Monster and he loved eating knights. Frederick leaped out of the way but the monster blew fire on him…

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  1. m1ssp says:

    I love this entry Max. You have chosen a really interesting theme. I also love how you have used alliteration in your opening sentence too. Next time, remember to add in commas after fronted adverbials to make your writnig even better.
    Very well done for your first entry of 2017!
    Miss P πŸ™‚

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