It was a stormy night. Jake was always making mishaps. He stood under the bus shelter staring at Buckingham Palace. Jake was unpeeling his orange when he saw a group of teenagers trying to break into Buckingham Palace. He had to stop them.

Jake crept behind them using the clutter of binbags as cover. But then he tripped over one and the group turned around. Luckily Jake wasn’t seen.

Jake called the police immediately. The teenagers were caught and their parents were very angry with them. Jake was a hero. Everyone said that he was victorious and never clumsy again!!!

2 responses »

  1. m1ssp says:

    I love your Jake character Lucy….just an ordinary chap with extraordinary things happening to him! I’m intrigued to know why you chose Buckingham Palace….perhaps it’s the worst place imaginable to have a break in?!
    Great use of all the words Lucy.
    Well done and thank you for your entry!
    Miss P πŸ˜€

  2. arabella100 says:

    I agree Miss P Lucy has an amazing imagination!


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