It was pitch black and the middle of Christmas Eve. Snow was showering down on everything in its sight and everyone was inside. But there was one mysterious figure who was trudging through the snow. His name was Jake and he was looking for his friend’s old umbrella. Seeing a rickety bench in the old abandoned railway station Jake raced towards it. He thought that his friend’s umbrella might be there because he liked to have a chat with him there. Looking around Jake saw the umbrella but it was being picked up! Jake ran but it was too late…..

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  1. m1ssp says:

    I really love this entry Max – you have added in some fabulous description and have made it sound so Christmasy. Some excellent vocabulary has really helped me to picture the scene in my head too.
    Very well done – I love it!
    Miss P πŸ™‚

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