Long, long ago there was a half-human half-giant wandering round the snow-covered freezing path. This mysterious man was called Hadgrid, he was 25ft tall and wore a brown, shabby, leather jacket.

Extraordinarily , Hadgrid picked up a lost umbrella and most of the freezing snow vanished into thin air. A small boy who was riding his tricycle nearby was blowing bubble-gum and somehow managed to make it explode all over his chubby, squishy face, he was so amazed. The boy sat on the bench with Hadgrid and neither one of them exchanged a word they just sat watching their surroundings.

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  1. m1ssp says:

    Firstly, I love the description of the boy’s face – you have chosen some excellent vocabuary to help paint a clear picture in the reader’s head. Your final sentence too is very intriguing…..you make it sound as though it was an ordinary day just sitting on the bench when in fact it was anything but!
    Well done Lewis.
    Miss P πŸ™‚

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