As dusk fell, the moon showed its bright face once again. It was a cold and pitch-black night, it was Christmas Eve. No one was out all except me and a tiny little figure half drowning in the white snow making its way to the abandoned umbrella and bench! Boldly, the tiny person threw itself onto the white, frozen bench. At this time on this special night, sleigh bells could be heard for miles. Then I realized it was an elf and what was this – Father Christmas? What was he doing? Then I woke on this beautiful Christmas morning.

6 responses »

  1. m1ssp says:

    What a truly beautiful piece of writing Arabella! It’s so cleverly put together with some fabulous descriptive vocabulary and wonderful sentence starters.
    An amazingly Christmassy contribution – I love it!
    Well done,
    Miss P πŸ˜€

  2. Sophia H says:

    I love the way you have related your 100 word challenge to Christmas.Great idea Arabella!!!!

  3. Max Spencer says:

    I like how you used words like ”As dusk fell” Arabella well done!

  4. Charlotte P says:

    I like the questions at the end

    well done.

  5. Sophia N says:

    Arabella I like how you asked questions about Santa at the end

  6. sara says:

    I like it arabella

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