Thundersmoke the young dragon was an orphan, his parents had been hunted and killed by the local people who were terrified of them.
In the warmth of the chamber he felt safe, it had a special smell which rose from the hot lava. The only light came from a rotten wooden door at the top of some slippery stone steps.
Every day a small boy, Otto, crept carefully down to sit with him, both were lonely.
The dragon told tales of exciting adventures he had with his parents, maybe one day Otto and the dragon would share an adventure together…

7 responses »

  1. Sophia H says:

    Amazing cliffhanger!!!

  2. Sam says:

    it made me emotional

  3. Aiden says:

    I like the Expanded noun phrase slippery ,stone steps.

  4. Max Spencer says:

    Best description ever Theo well done!

  5. Theo curry says:

    Thank you Max

  6. m1ssp says:

    Theo I love how you have carefully crafted some of your sentences to start with fronted adverbials to give more detail to the reader. I especially like ‘In the warmth of the chamber’. I also really love how you left the end of the story wide open ready for the next adventure…
    Great work!
    Miss P ๐Ÿ™‚

  7. James French says:

    I love your idears

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