The man walked closer. Maybe it wasn’t a good idea to be looking for the dragon jewel. Even though it proved great power, it was guarded by a Mano dragon. These dragons are the most dangerous species in all of the world of Mindsitemb. They were able to control the land, sea and sky.
โ€œHumโ€ he thought.
First he would have to find the Jewel. Then a glimpse of light shined on the glass.
โ€œThe Dragon Jewelโ€ he thought.
โ€œUsing its power, I can rule the World.โ€
But he had to get it from the Mano Dragon…

4 responses »

  1. Theo curry says:

    What happens next

  2. m1ssp says:

    I love this Stephanie because you have used one of my favourite writing techniques which is to not mention the main character by name…this leaves the reader guessing and more intrigued to find out who it might be!
    You have also used just the right amount of speech to move the plot on but not too much so that we lose sense of what is happening.
    Fantastic effort – well done!
    Miss P ๐Ÿ™‚

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