The Lonely Dragon

In a castle over a million years old, lived an enormous, scaly dragon that was very lonely. However he wasn’t alone, there was a boy called Darren who was petrified, and very lonely. Darren had light brown hair, a navy blue t-shirt and a pair of worn out shoes. Then one day the dragon bumped into Darren and said sorry, they smiled at each other. They’ve been smiling ever since they bumped into each other, so they both became good friends and never split apart or hid from each other, well only when they were playing games.

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  1. m1ssp says:

    What a lovely friendship story Sophie. You have cleverly brought something very ordinary together with something very magical!! What a clever trick to use.
    I have also noticed some fronted adverbials to add detail…can you spot them?
    Well done!
    Miss P 🙂

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