Once there was a boy he was different to every one else because he was a … God. One day the King sent the boy to a cave to slay the dragon. He said “why me I’m just a boy that’s a God, a boy v dragon is so unfair.” The King replied “I know it’s unfair on the dragon’’. “I meant me ” said the boy. well I don’t care go and fight the dragon! The king answered . The boy went to fight the dragen.On his way he met some warriers and he asked them ‘’do you want to fight a dragen…

8 responses »

  1. Sophia H says:

    I love the way you put the King saying a mistake by saying it’s unfair on the dragon LOL!!!!!

  2. Max Spencer says:

    I love how you did the comedy well done!

  3. Olivia Pearson says:

    I love your story and I like how you have involved more characters and used speach marks to make it more interesting.

  4. Charlotte Dowland says:

    i like how you just used two characters so its not that complicated.

  5. m1ssp says:

    Well Sam you have given me enough information to predict the next part of the story. Does the boy manage to trick the warriors into fighting the dragon for him? Or does something more sinister happen?
    I’d love to read the next part.
    Well done.
    Miss P 🙂

  6. kenmeacham says:

    Fab punctuation and it’s very funny.

  7. Jason says:

    Fab punctuation and it’s very funny.

  8. Marion B says:

    Great start Sam, I can’t wait to hear the rest of it

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