Once there was a boy called Billy, he was always in trouble as he was always wondering off. One day Billy decided to go on an adventure, his family were poor and he wanted to find treasure boxes and gold to help his family.

Billy wondered through the dark forest near his home and came across a temple. The temple was very old and covered in bushes. He found a hole and managed to wiggle through. When he got inside he found a chamber with lots of gold and treasures. But the treasure was guarded by a big red dragonโ€ฆ..

3 responses »

  1. m1ssp says:

    This is almost the start of a classic fairy tale Olivia. You have made everything sound so ordinary but then suddenly it all changes when we discover the chambers and the big dragon. I also like how you have carefully organised your writing into paragraphs.
    Great work – well done!
    Miss P ๐Ÿ™‚

  2. Sam says:

    I really want to know what happens next!

  3. Theo says:

    I love it

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