Hi, I am Elliot and I just walked into a cave and saw some dragons sleeping.
There was wood surrounding them. I couldn’t move because I was afraid I would wake them up.
I couldn’t breathe. I tried to move away and hold my breath at the same time but then one saw me and then all of them woke up. It was a nightmare. I ran as fast as I could. I ran in circles but then out of nowhere someone came to save me. I jumped into their car but then I realized  it was all a dream.

6 responses »

  1. Scarlett says:

    Wow a what an amazing cliffhanger!

    I want to know what happens next!

  2. Sophia H says:

    I like the way you put although luckily it was a dream

  3. Max Spencer says:

    Love how you put it first person well done!

  4. Arabella says:

    Lucy I like the way you added a twist to the ending.

  5. m1ssp says:

    I really like how you have written your story in the first person Lucy as no one else has done that. It almost makes your writing that little bit more realistic and scary for me….until I learn that it was all a dream, of course!
    Great effort – well done!
    Miss P 🙂

  6. jamesmeacham says:

    Why not more action lucy?

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