Once in a dark damp cave there was a boy his name was Fred. In the middle of the cave there was a big pit of lava. Fred didn’t know that a dragon was in the pit of laver. Well it wasn’t long before Fred knew about the dragon in the pit. The dragon and Fred started a fight. How is it going to end? I didn’t tell you that that Fred was a young knight who had a sword. Fred had been a knight since he was a boy. It was a long time before Fred killed a dragon.


5 responses »

  1. Aiden says:

    I like the way you described Fred 🙂

  2. Sophia H says:

    I like the way you added in the information that Fred was a knight in the ending sentences.

  3. Henry says:

    Who will win Jamie?

  4. Max Spencer says:

    Love your description Jamie well done!

  5. m1ssp says:

    Such a lovely story Jamie and I especially like your writing style which is quite chatty and informal…..and now I am wondering ‘How does it end?’ Did Fred use his amazing knight skills to defeat the dragon…??
    Great work Jamie.
    Well done!
    Miss P 🙂

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