“An evil overlord wants to take over Nin island for himself and steal its magical blades. There are three magical blades and they can make ice, fire and lightning. The five friends are samurai, who guard the blades and protect the land from the evil overlord.
The blades are hidden in a temple which is made of large gobblestone blocks, sand, uncrushable titanium columns and crystal clear glass. The temple is surrounded by lots and lots of trees, bushes and huge bamboos. Vines grow around the temple to disguise it and hide it so that no-one can see.
The temple…….”

10 responses »

  1. Sophia H says:

    Your story is great and I like how you explained the story temple is see through.

  2. I like the way that you have used good vocabulary!

  3. Tilly D says:

    I love the idea of having magical blades because it sounds epic!

  4. Jamie says:

    Good descriptions. What happens next?

  5. Aiden says:

    I like your good description, them bamboos sound tough.

  6. stephanie M says:

    one word Henry. WOW.

  7. Max Spencer says:

    I couldn’t have done better well done!

  8. Theo curry says:

    I love your story it is brilliant Henry

  9. m1ssp says:

    Oh wow Henry – I was completely hooked by your amazing description from start to finish in your writing. Your excellent vocabulary choices have really made me be able to picture the scene in my head…..and it sounds like an incredible place for an adventure!
    Well done.
    Miss P 🙂

  10. CHARLOTTE P says:

    How awesome is that Henry?

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