On the land Fire Island there was a dark, gloomy cave 23 miles away from King Solomon tall castle. The mysterious castle had huge turrets which look high into the sky, they were used to fire deadly weapons at enemies. But in that cave there was a mean, red dragon and with that dragon lived boy called timothy. Timothy loved the dragon and the dragon loved timothy so much he protected the boy from army troops. The boy ran away from home when his country was being invaded by Canadian army troops, he felt safe with the dragon protecting him.

9 responses »

  1. Tegan says:

    Fire Island and King Solomon tall castle sound really good.

  2. Lewis says:

    Wow Connie great idea – I never thought to make them friends.

  3. Jack Roberts says:

    I like the sound of this story Connie, i wonder what will come next.

  4. m1ssp says:

    I love your idea of Fire Island Connie. You have included lots of great description, especially of the castle.
    A perfect little story – well done!
    Miss P ๐Ÿ™‚

  5. Max Spencer says:

    I love how you described everything well done!

  6. Aiden says:

    I really pictured the story in my head. Great vocabulary as well. Wow! so good.

  7. Sophia H says:

    I love the fact that you made your story a very good cliffhanger.

  8. Tilly D says:

    I love the fact the dragon looks after the little boy Connie. I would like a dragon!

  9. Sara O says:

    It is a really interesting story Connie!

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