The really savage Queen dragon

Behind the trees in the savage jungle was an gigantic island called Savina. Savina was a place where men were brought up to fight dragons and women were petrified in their cottages. The dragons damaged all the buildings. One day the most heroic warrior volunteered to go to the dragon’s lair, where the Queen dragon lived. Without her the other dragons would have nothing. The heroic warriors name was Saddon. He went to the dragon’s lair. The queen dragon was in a deep lava pit. Saddon dodged the lava and stabbed the unaware dragon in the back. It was dead.

3 responses »

  1. m1ssp says:

    Wow Charlotte, I love the way you have started your first sentence with a fronted adverbial. You have also made me want to know more about the heroic warrior simply by not giving away too much information to the reader.
    Fabulous from start to finish!
    Well done!
    Miss P 🙂

  2. Stephanie says:

    Saddon sounds really nice.

  3. Jason says:

    Very interesting story Charlotte! I wonder what is going to happen next.

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