Another day in the dark, miserable ruins of the castle and George could bear it no longer, sharing his home with this slithering reptile! The basement had stunk since the day he reached it. He had only wanted freedom, from the palace and duty not this crumbling basement. How had his life come to this a run-away boy, he was always being chased by guards. Why couldn’t they let him live the life he wanted? Just then the fire red dragon started to back him into a corner. George had had enough, trembling inside he drew his sword. . .

7 responses »

  1. Max Spencer says:

    Love how you did questions for the reader Arabella well done!

  2. Olivia Pearson says:

    This is an exciting story and I want to know what happens next!

  3. stephanie M says:

    That sounds like a miserabel life.

  4. Iris R says:

    I like your sentece starter “another day in the dark” and the way you have used a fronted adverbial at the start.

  5. m1ssp says:

    I really love your opening line Arabella – it really drew me in because I wanted to know so much more immediately! Everyone of your sentences had me intrigued…..what an amazing writing style you have…..and you ended on a brilliant cliff hanger!
    Well done!
    Miss P πŸ™‚

  6. lucy says:

    I like the key words that you used in your story

  7. CHARLOTTE P says:

    I want to hear more it was amazing well done Arabella

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